詠蛙 / 光我神州完我責

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自娱自乐君玩韵脚功夫颇深。 欣赏之余，凑兴：


詠蛙
毛泽东

獨坐池塘如虎踞，

綠楊樹下養精神。

春來我不先開口，

哪個蟲兒敢作聲？

Ode to the Frog
by Zedong Mao

Like a crouching tiger in the pond I sit 
Under green willow I restore my spirit 
As spring dawns before I cry ribbit ribbit 
Which insect out there dares to hum, you nitwit? 

Tr. Yuntian


【云天晕语】

好个 ”春來我不先開口，
/哪個蟲兒敢作聲“， 独断专行 was in his blood。遭殃者，百姓也。哀哉。

反反复复地凑，韵脚还是凑成了。看来凑不出来时，是不够用功。

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这首诗译也是赏读自娱君美译后凑兴，这首拙译倒是得来全不费功夫：

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光我神州完我責 蒋中正 騰騰殺氣滿全球， 力不如人萬事休！ 光我神州完我責， 東來志豈在封侯！ I Must Fulfill My Duty to Glorify My Nation by Chiang Kai-Shek Killings sweep all over the land and ocean One achieves nothing in a weak position! It's my duty to glorify my nation I don't go to Japan to gain promotion! Tr. Yuntian